The world background and the writing style is good. The only negative point is the braindead foolish MC(i read till ch68 in royalroad). No one can be more irritatingly idiotic than this MC and if anyone is more idiotic then they will directly come under the mental illness category. He is so idiotic that he cant even realise the most obvious of things. The author might be making this MC a super idiot lucky b@stard for the progression of the plot but it will definitely lead to the failure of this good story. I hope he realises it soon corrects it. If he does that, this story will be the best. But this wouldnt have been a drawback if the author had named it "The brainless fool that killled the first monster" or if he had said in the introduction that the MC will have some mental problems.
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