Review Detail of BabyTanuki in The demonic celestial

I like the idea. Also, very nice picture for the cover. The names of the people are very relatable and the setting seems interesting so far. I feel you do a good job balancing out the dialogue and the text . You really need to use Grammarly. You have many punctuation errors and run-on sentences. Another thing that will help you is if you split your paragraphs more. They are long and difficult to read. Before you write more, I strongly suggest running the past chapters through the website/program I talked about earlier. I know you will only get better with time! Go Author!