Review Detail of PurplePoohBear in The Anarchic Consort

This feels like a first novel by a new writer. I don't know if that is the case. Overall, this is a good read. There are some issues that would easily be cleared up with some editorial help from fellow writers or qualified friends and family. The translation to English could have been better. Often, the pronouns were incorrect, which made comprehension difficult. Also, the vocabulary shows a limited understanding of English, but if they keep stretching their legs in English, then this issue would be resolved. Definitely worth the read. Enjoy!