If the FL is dressed as a male, then use male pronouns for her, otherwise it becomes confusing and hard to know who is in on the secret

This is one of the best books I've read in this genre. The world-building is amazing and realistic. The characters, though unrealistically extraordinary, are written so well that you're willing to accept them despite these elements. The story is tight and well thought out and very entertaining. Be aware that the author has a tendency to use valuable real estate by including pleas for stars and gifts at the end of each chapter and because they're not in the author's notes, but attached to the end of the chapter. This boosts word-count and increases the author's remuneration. I will not include spoilers. It's a brilliant work. I hope we will get more works from them. Enjoy.

We have to pay for the extra page of author comments, which isn't reasonable given the price of these novels is 10-20 times the price of any novel on Kindle or Nook.

This is getting old. Yet more Marital Abuse. When I've reached the end of the chapters that I've unlocked, then I'm taking this novel out of my lists. I will never read anything from this writer again. They clearly don't understand the difference between sexual assault/marital abuse and a normal relationship.

And how is he not a rapist ?

Finally !

WTH?! If you demand something and use coercion to get it, then it is not freely given. I'm about to quit reading this book if it doesn't improve soon.

This feels like a first novel by a new writer. I don't know if that is the case. Overall, this is a good read. There are some issues that would easily be cleared up with some editorial help from fellow writers or qualified friends and family. The translation to English could have been better. Often, the pronouns were incorrect, which made comprehension difficult. Also, the vocabulary shows a limited understanding of English, but if they keep stretching their legs in English, then this issue would be resolved. Definitely worth the read. Enjoy!

I love this novel! The relationship between the FL and ML is well thought out. It's often cute and funny during the oddest moments. The side characters really fill the story out.

This has been a joy to read. The protagonist is the most brilliant creation. She delivers from page one all the way to the last word. I will not give spoilers because you will love the Journey more if you discover it yourself.

This is a really good read. The story never plodded. The plot was well-thought out and the characters were well fleshed out. There were a few issues with the translation. The names get messed up and some of the vocabulary is misused. If you take a moment to untangle the names and vocabulary, then you can divine the author's intent. Enjoy!

Well written. Good story. Well developed characters. Definitely worth the read. The few issues with translation didn't interfere with my enjoyment of the novel.

They must be using a different Bible or maybe they missed that Sunday. 🤦‍♀️🤷‍♀️🙍🏼‍♀️

How is she the daughter of the general's 1st wife, but is the 6th daughter? Wouldn't that make all of her older siblings illegitimate? Also, why make her 13? It makes all of the male characters seem like perverts.

Overall, it's a good read. The story moves along pretty quickly. Some of the translation is a little muddy and this leads to some confusion regarding some plot points. After reading the whole novel, the ending seemed forced and not well thought out. Enjoy .

I think Joan is a better strategist. She should be in charge .

Ok, I've gotten to chapter 7 and the author still continues to use incorrect pronouns for the FL. It's destroying my suspension of disbelief, so I can't continue reading this novel. I'll check back next year to see if the author has made corrections. This is gender bender and pronouns help develop the story.

Is the FL and her parents the only ones acting like she's a young man ?!

Young MAN

Young MAN