LunaAqua
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Sounds about right
Desmond_Soliare The story definitely development till that point. Some people just need to give their opinions without tearing others down for it. Your justified for your criticism as all writers want to give their best and learn from different people in order for the readers to enjoy their book. That's why they say give me your opinion even if it's a ‘ I love your story’ or ‘ the plot has turned a certain way I don't like cause of plotholes etc’ everyone need criticism to make things or themselves better period so don't apologize
They keep opening the door what’s the point of even telling them to don’t open it 🙄
If it was that’s funny
In one of the chapters before it said 23?
I kinda love powers so I don’t understand the hate as long as it’s reasonable 🤷🏽♀️
Im so confused 😕
So u just gon let her talk about yo man like that
Guards?
This is like correcting someone to say your name right ugh
Ohhh he f**ked up
I was ready for this (start the training)
So is he or not 🧐
Yes, yes I do
Meh it was both