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and lightning techniques can be learned though he does need it since speed is covered by void and other aspects will be covered by7 primary elements
check the details of the right eye, it is kyoka suigetsu with a bit of nerf
don't worry about hiatus and all, i will complete it for sure as my own personal project even if i receive no support at all as i have said before but there might be 1 month hiatus during exams or other things happening in my life but it will continue and end for sure
The true alchemy way was a scripture which included the lifetime work and enlightenments of spirit or most probably saint grade alchemist which was inscribed inside the room where myriad drug well was and forcefully entered yang kai's mind after taking out all the liquid. check around chapter 220-225
Too late bro but i will consider it when he will explore the dao of time on his own
Can you comment it again please?
I understand Hua qin si as a concubine but all others don't feel that important or appear to have potential
About lan xun and mo xiao qi, i will ask the readers and conduct a poll for then as for yang yan and zhang ruo xi they are essential for the harem so they will be there for sure. Zhang ruo xi was one of the best girls even until the end of martial peak also has arguably the best bloodline so she can't be left out. As well as Smiles old ancestor, Lan You Ruo and a few others from outer verse will be added too. You can write all of your suggestion i will take a note ofthem down and include them in the pole later to decide whether they should be added. (Max harem = around 20 i hope)
Well there is a thing if you shout your zanpakuto moves it gets more powerful but he will only shout 2-3
Oops i just realised it this scene is a plot hole after reading my fic's later chapter, I will fix it and thank you for pointing out
She is pretty much useless aside from her appeal as a twin and didn't have much in the original story as well so i decided to not include her and things would still go smoothly as you read
It is.
It was because he was too weak too open the 6th page as the black book pages open as yang kai grew in cultivation also the last and 7th page when he gained spiritual energy. Also if it still doesn't feel right think of it as the reasoning of my fic
thank you for taking your time out to point out everything. I will try to slow the pace as well as make everyone interact more to avoid such problems as for the cultivation part, starting world has too many major and way too many minor realm so I had to do this otherwise he will take his time also [Map] is for treasure finding based on their energy signature so it is going to help him a lot