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AverageJoe2

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2024-01-16 เข้าร่วมแล้วAustralia
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  • AverageJoe2
    AverageJoe23mth
    ตอบกลับถึง ShowmikBD

    no

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    ตอบกลับถึง Im_LaZy_007

    No problem this was the whole point of my review to answer questions

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    ตอบกลับถึง Im_LaZy_007

    There will be more female characters in the story but they will have a part in the story but will not stay so you could say it is a harem in that direction but if you are asking the MC has multiple relationships no.

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    ตอบกลับถึง Im_LaZy_007

    No

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    ตอบกลับถึง AverageJoe2

    Sorry about your comment I saw two but when I deleted one of them it deleted both

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    ตอบกลับถึง Im_LaZy_007

    It going to be a harem but end of with only one female so it can be considered both.

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  • AverageJoe2
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    This feels like a shameless plug, but hey, I've poured my heart and soul into this web novel, and Web Novel isn't giving it the recognition it deserves. So, let me tell you what's special about it. Beyond the typical system novel, my main character is an iskied to this world, adding a layer of uniqueness. I've tried to make some unique powers that I hope will blow your mind. Now, let's get real. The strong points? It's gotta be the dialogue. I've spent a lot of time making those conversations pop. But, I'll be honest, my action and background scenes could use some work. So, here's where I'm asking for help. If you've got suggestions on how to amp up the action and make those backgrounds more vivid, hit me up. And yes, I gave myself five stars on world-building. Go ahead, fight me on it. (Just kidding, please don't actually fight me.) Alright, enough rambling. If you're into the things I've mentioned, give it a read. And for those who've already dived in, hit me with your questions. Let's make this a conversation.

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    ตอบกลับถึง Fkhri_Maulana

    Thanks for the support

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    ตอบกลับถึง Rotten_CucumberY

    Sorry, if you want to know why check the next chapter

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    ตอบกลับถึง Fkhri_Maulana

    Sorry, if you want to know why check the next chapter

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  • AverageJoe2
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    ตอบกลับถึง Rotten_CucumberY

    I agree never let a person make you end your life, you should just get revenge [img=recommend].

    In the solitude of the moment, he muttered, "What a futile world I live in, and in that, I am the most worthless of worthless trash there is in this futile world. I've been used and thrown away throughout my life, and every single time it has always ended up with me taking all the pain. I shouldn't have been born if I was meant to live life like this, It's just better if I end it." as he stood on top of the bridge ledge, contemplating the depths of his despair.
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    ตอบกลับถึง Rotten_CucumberY

    Thank you for the review. [img=recommend]

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    you don't need wonder and think just do one.

    As he rushes to go to his workplace, Justin then stops because the pedestrian light is currently red. As Justin waits for the red light to go green, he begins to wonder and think about how much he is going to be yelled at and nag at by his boss.
    Rage Fuel!!!
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    A longing to cling to the precious image of his mother forever.
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    Sounds like me

    He was rebellious, and full of ignorance.
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    ตอบกลับถึง Chii_Yayako

    Thank you for the review hope you continue to reading it, [img=recommend]

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    Experiencing writer's block so I am going to review my own book seems ironic, but here goes. Today marks a significant milestone with the book reaching fifty collections. I'm sincerely grateful for all the support. This book, blending comedy, games, romance, and academics, is a unique journey hope have a read if you like this topic and hope you don't find any grammar mistakes(I am blind at finding grammatical errors but if do feel free to point them out)and got any question on the book fee free to ask them here.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] That's all I have to say back to writing oh wait can't have writer's block guess got to do something.

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