Lauren_Layton

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Does this have sex scenes in it?

Is this story finished or did the author leave it undone?

This is my second time reading this and it never disappoints. The sex scene was great and everyone is so supportive. It's really well written and you can really feel the characters. It's wonderful. Everyone should read it if you like a really sweet gay couple finding their start. 😍🥰😊

It begins with chapter 2?! And you have to pay right off the bat? That doesn't seem right.

I can't give it a full 5 stars for two reasons... one, there was a lot of "had had" in the book. one "had" Is enough. if you read the sentence over, having two "had"s right after each other is redundant. Second, in the middle of chapter 88, mitch was going to bottom but the author cut it off. It seemed to lead up to it so I was disappointed. otherwise it's pretty good.

It was ok. Too much internal dialogue though.

I wish it was longer only because it was that good. Very hot 🔥 and sexy. You felt the need and connection they had.

Is there hot sex scenes in this story? I'm not ashamed to say that I sometimes need a fix of smut. [img=Loving it]