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"My alter." 💀 At first I thought it was a split personality but then I realised it was an... MC inside an MC! That blew my mind. 💀 The writing style is good but I think you should slow down a bit when describing so it doesn't smack readers.

😅 And I was thinking it was the least scary among the rest.

Thank you for the motivation 🤗

"You haven't smashed on either side?!---- Are you celibate?!! 🤣🤣🤣Void is hilarious. I like how you're mixing Octavios' past line behaviour with Voids slang from the future. Bro doesn't even know what 'fuck' is. 🤣🤭 This book is good pls continue with the 3rd POV don't change from it. Also try to describe the environs more vividly. You're trying with the main characters' expressions and emotions, keep it up.👍👍

A girl with an 'i don't care' attitude and a guy with a heart for helping others?!!! Arrrrrrgh!! Finally someone has written a story about teens. I'm looking forward to seeing how their future interactions will be like. Please introduce an antagonist soon. PS: I love how you took time in explaining their family backgrounds.

😳 What did I just read?! They had sex while he was in his wolf form?!!! I don't like Ace's attitude to her, please find a way for her to cause him pain before she falls in love with him---- he deserves it. I like your writing style but I think you should describe the environs and the main characters' expressions especially Ace's expressions, more vividly. Other than that, this book is wonderful.

About the 3rd POV thing; I'll try that. Thanks for the advice.

Thanks for the review. 🤗💝

I've never heard of a Tama or a vampire spirit in book before, this is new. I'm already hooked. PS: I'm glad you put the age rating at Parents caution.

Yes I am.