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“And that’s how you came to be”
Bro stopped with the rather 😭 it isn’t needed.
You could explain that it’s a FPP a bit earlier so that it’s easier to understand what perspective it is. For example “And I was among one of those spectors, hopeless.” This was from a few paragraphs back. If you do that then you won’t have to bother with a transition.
Wait, Lazy? The hell you doing here?
Nah, it’s fine as it is
So basically clash of clans & rise of kingdoms?
So… it’s basically a loading screen?
Agreed
Sigh, another author thinking that I’m going to remember this shi
Do you have a discord server? If so, can you invite me?
Author wilding rn
… that’s one hell of a Intro for a chapter
Then it’s not impossible, is it?
Ohhh, okay, thanks for the clarification.
Oi, strong doesn’t always equal good. So don’t think just because someone is strong they will help you. Even if this person would portray themselves as “good”, they would most likely charge of afterwards
Hey! Come on now! Don’t waste your tears on her! You could probably get another one! Remember, there are countless fish in the world, and they are still growing!(at least, for now they are)
Cuz you broke.
Ohhhhhhh, smart, you are very smart. Your going to let her grow, then sell her! Very smart of you! But I recon that selling her while she is still young is still the best option