UnCultured_Daoist
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I don't know this is funny 😂
a similar event happened in another novel i read... but i remember it was triggered in a different way were mc kiled young king and pushed his sivered head in the crack to trigger a similar event. anyway , sory is good so far i like the game concept .. i hope you focus on the game and different mechanics of the game and rulers and not go on random drama and usless romance like most webnovel authors do becouse the concept is really cool
they don't fell like gangsters
two years is not a long time and considering he didn't advance much in the game and even his playing was wrong ... i would say he doesn't have much knowledge to his advantage .. i mean there are people who started playing four years earlier since the game released .. wich is still much longer time and experience than he had before regressing ... anyway i dont see him having that much advantage except a fresh start a do over ... but many other players probably has more experience than he does .
please no dragon pet ... they are over used to the point its annoying somtime. anyway a phoenix would be good .. i like them . they are cool .
Please don't make the dragon thing a major part of his power, it's too OVERUSED in this type of novels, maybe you can introduce the Phionix bloodline or something... It would be much cooler the the dragon thing. Just don't make it a major part of Leon's powers... Because I feel it's too cliche especially in this novel that is like a parody on the cliches of the genre.
Please don't turn him into a dragon, make stay as human with dragon power, and even if you are gonna change his race don't make it a dragon. I think it's too over used.