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yeah it's slow but take your time, speeding up events would only lead to errors that can be avoided especially if you are a beginner in writing

No-Harem , single FL please

author there is a problem here, lyrium should not be surprised since this is what he is looking for right? and you wrote it in the previous chapter Thank for the chapter and give us more

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author, i'm confused, who is the mc?

I am writing this review now because I think the novel has great potential and the first chapters prove it, however, I will update my review depending on the development of the novel, whether in a good or bad way.

damn just reading the summary hurts my eyes and I don't understand how you were able to translate that without dying author honestly I give 2⭐️ for what you endured

wow man this is super good, I want you to improve well, the writing is better than the previous chapter

hey man when are you gonna start your Reborn in Novel's Extra as Shadow Monarch fanfiction

Je ne sais pas si c'est juste moi, mais ce chapitre est trop embarrassant tout comme le prologue, je ne sais pas non plus si tu es nouveau ou non, mais tu dois améliorer ton style d'écriture