BlueCactusE

Thanks for the chapter.

It seems the apprentices should not have spent the magic stones and instead kept them to aid in advancing their skills. It's odd that no one mentioned that to six through 10 year-olds.

It seems she might be related to the royal family, possibly even a princess.

Hmm, since it was some kind of ritual, I wonder if he and Colin swapped places. If so, hopefully, Colin has good memories to integrate with.

It's a little rare, but there are 18 cities in the world named Ryan, in three different countries. For example, there is a city named Ryan in the state of Oklahoma, USA, which is named after rancher Stephen W. Ryan.

That's certainly a possibility.

It's more clear and concise, for this sentence, to use err instead of error. For example: "to err" is similar to "to be in error" or "to make an error."

It didn't say her hair covered her face, just that it was chin length. 🙂

Did they really mean lap, or is it a mistranslation? 😅🤭 In any case, no further comments on this from me.

Well, at least it's not the Valkerie, as I'd first imagined. The Dawn ship had better send over proof of his death quickly, or the Empire may never stop looking for him.