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This novel makes a plot just for the sake of filling up the plot. Enemy come unexpectedly without prior teaser. Enemy escape to lengthened the plot by ridiculous circumstances without clear logical move. Similar to plot armor, but worse. MC basically already strongest Shinobi in the world, still nerved just for the sake of wanting to have new plot. I mean, if he is OP then let him be OP, don't drowngrade his ability just for the sake of wanting to keep certain vilian character alive. And most importantly, Naruto plot is not yet flexed until the late-game and it's already new enemy.
I thought having cultivator abilities will remove the charm of Naruto fanfic where fighting is based on boring cultivation level. But this novel does not do that. The fighting and action is exactrliting. So with that 5/5.
I always find it annoying if novel have much Chat GPT bullshit in it. It's like one small plot being stretched out endlnessly by empty beutiful word that does not give any benefit to the current plot.
For the first ten chapters, the tags will be permanent. This means I want to write very light, enjoyable reading with minimal conflict or face-slapping, focusing instead on the two protagonists enjoying themselves in the world of immortals. For anyone wondering in the future about my ability to write something dark or if the MC and FMC are too righteous for your taste, just check out my other work. They are essentially the same characters who can do something horrible, but in this instance, they choose not to.
Yeah, she is the one. But don’t expect a WOTR-style fanfic with extensive lore and details. In this universe, their past history is pretty much shallow.
Yeah, I know. I realize that. I put in too much fandom content, and as a result, it became convoluted and hard to understand.