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A very slapstick comedy take for the most part but there are several serious items that break it up in the worst way possible. It almost feels like the author wants to write something different but doesn’t know how. The over powered mc is a little amusing but then he keeps getting better without doing anything. If he was searching this stuff out I’d be fine with it but it’s nonsensical stuff that falls into his lap and then is immediately useful. It just reeks of a lack of planning.
The lion king?
That dropped fast it was a full hour last chapter. 😆
Sigh. Ok this is just so bad. When the mc just gets stuff like this over and over it’s just boring. The mc is just way to passive to be interesting.
Lazy writing.
Initially the mc is depicted as hard working and the rewards are about what he deserves. However, eventually it’s like the author got bored of justifying why the mc should get thing so he just starts shoving bonuses down the mcs throat faster then he can swallow. A perfect example of this is that right after learning a technique that needs rare raw materials a friend appears and guides him to get the perfect material in no time all. It might have even been the same chapter. It’s just lazy writing. Also, a bunch of the time it feels more like reading a summary of a novel than reading an actual novel. I appreciate that some things take awhile and we don’t need to read about everything but as we go the author uses times skips more and more while providing less and less detail.
Good. Nothing is as boring as an mc that always wins without cost. It cheapens the experience and makes everything feel less important.
Huh. An actually semi-reasonable antagonist.
Didn’t he get 60 portions? Eight out of 60 is well below 30%.
Does the author mean first realm?