Ajwoohin
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Ajwoohin9mthตอบกลับถึง Soul_in_Seoulalso his vitality grow cus he endured the pain when he absorbed the dark mana
Vitality: 6 (+3)- Ajwoohin9mthตอบกลับถึง
hm to explain it simpler if you workout everyday eventually u will notice small changes while as for bell since he has the system advantage he can grow fast unlike any average, another example when bell couldn't even handle holding the axe for too long, after hours of him trying and trying he can now lift it normally since his stats increase also if you stopped reading this novel I would like to hear ur opinion on why'd u stop thx
Vitality: 6 (+3) - Ajwoohin10mthตอบกลับถึง Soul_in_Seoul
you give a detailed review/comments especially I keep seeing ur comment on novels I read, so I have a shameful request if u could critique my novel be brutality honest
An alchemist was a profession that only had a small return on investment in the early stages. Do not look at how the later stages of the profession were filled with wealth that could rival a country. However, it was very normal for the early stages of the profession to be miserable. - Ajwoohin10mthแปะแล้ว
- Ajwoohin11mthแปะแล้ว
I can't say much yet since it's only been 2 chapter's but what I can do say is that ill be hoping a great future for this novel, the fight scene was great although it could use some tweaks but it was easy to understand and visualize it in my head I do like the route of the villian so I'll be hoping for more.
- Ajwoohin11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
try "ruffled " for more like tender or care or I have misunderstood .
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Ajwoohin11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
is it a typo? "am"? or "I'm"?
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Ajwoohin11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
perfectly described someone I know
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Ajwoohin11mthตอบกลับถึง Moonlee_xx
aight, thx for noticing.
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Ajwoohin11mthตอบกลับถึง Moonlee_xx
indeed! (work out addict)
System: Negative. - Ajwoohin11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I expected a plot twist that the duke was nc smh
"The Duke has finally started to lose it. I was wondering how long it was going to take." - Ajwoohin11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
wt* bro what in the npc shi is he doing
"Try and ignore me again!" He slashed his whip across my arm. My skin sizzled at the hit and my sleeve was ripped. - Ajwoohin11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I would grab it and ripped it
At that time, my eyes were focused on every word that the king wrote onto that paper. He finished the letter, signed it, folded it neatly, and stamped it with the royal seal. He handed it off to the butler and that took my last shred of happiness away. - Ajwoohin11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I'm their times maybe that's adulthood age??? but nah escaping is the best idea
Marriage… Father, I'm only 15. - Ajwoohin11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
betrayal
"Lily only wanted someone she could speak her heart to, and the Crown Prince was the only person she trusted fully. She felt her heart beat rapidly every time he was around, and butterflies whenever he would get close to her. Love, oh what a beautiful thing it is." - Ajwoohin11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
different hair/eye color = bully/gossip's make sense 🧠 🤓
The princess walked into the office only to find that it wasn't just the king who asked for her presence. Right next to the king stood her majesty, the Queen of the Kingdom of Hestia, Elizabeth Von Ferese Hestia. Following the queen stood the three lights of the kingdom. The Crown Princess, the First Prince and the Young Prince as well. All five family members shone brightly in the sunlight, with their dazzling golden hair and radiantly blue eyes. They stood with grace exuding the aura of royalty. On the other side of the room stood the second princess, with her dark brown hair and emerald green eyes, she looked like she wasn't a part of the family. With the astoundingly different appearance, rumours spread that the princess was actually an illegitimate child. The light to those rumours was never investigated. - Ajwoohin11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
what a typical servant thing to do
As she walked down the hallways, the maids and servants formed little huddled with their hands covering each other's ears, the sound of mumbles and whispers filling the entire hallway. Yet the princess continued to walk elegantly paying no mind to the context of those whispers.