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rimuru_12319dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วat the moment is important 😒🤔
It didn't make sense for Tai Lung to see her romantically after his reconciliation with Shifu and he was busy training so romance should have been the furthest in his mind. So it was either he did not form connection with her at all or he sees her as a sister at the moment.- rimuru_12320dตอบกลับถึง TheBurningLetter
so much so that there was no hate or rage were left
Shifu did not know how but his son had achieved the legendary inner peace while he was in prison. How Tai Lung was able to achieve such a thing after what he did to him and how everyone wronged him was a mystery. - rimuru_1236mthตอบกลับถึง STNove
it's your fanfic after all😁
As he left Meng Wu Ya thought "His Yang Qi was so pure, maybe he'll be perfect for that thing! I'll have to ask Chang'er" - rimuru_1236mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
hey bro when did he cultivate his yang qi🤔
As he left Meng Wu Ya thought "His Yang Qi was so pure, maybe he'll be perfect for that thing! I'll have to ask Chang'er" - rimuru_1239mthแปะแล้ว
I am writing this review to explain some stuff about this fanfic. 1 : Zhou Yuan was born with the Dual blessing of the Sacred dragon blessing and Taotai blessing. At first Taotai blessing was extremely suppressed by his sacred dragon blessing making people unable to notice it. This was why only his sacred dragon blessing was stolen and dragon resentment poison was sealed with in him. After that he had gained ability to hide his taotai blessing under dragon resentment poison making other people unable to detect it until he showed it to them or When he used infront of them. 2 : The thing about copy talent is that he can only use it to copy talent from someone if they either have talent which was superior to him or have a talent which he didn't have. and also he can't copy divine bone. 3 : Copy talent can also be used to copy someone's innate physic. He can't copy physic that are cultivated by people so keep that in mind. He can't copy physic like saint glass body and also he can't copy divine physic. 4 : I like the main story line as it's excellent work by its creator so This fanfic will follow main story line along with few spices from me. So keep this in mind while reading it. Hope you enjoy the story
- rimuru_1239mthตอบกลับถึง Manohara_S
English isn't my first or second language but I am trying to improve it.🙂
Hope you will enjoy it. - rimuru_1239mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 1 Author's note
- rimuru_1239mthตอบกลับถึง daoistwindking
I already said it will follow the main story and I want starting chapter to remain the same Because it shows his relation ship with his family. Now it will be fast passed from here and I remind you again it will be same as the main story apart from the few changes. If you have any idea do comment it here.
- rimuru_1239mthตอบกลับถึง Stoned_Daoist_666
Yes, it was a mistake on my part. I will correct it.
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - rimuru_1231yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh -2 Harem
- rimuru_1231yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh -2 Harem
- rimuru_1231yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh -2 Harem
- rimuru_1231yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 5 Shells town
- rimuru_1231yrตอบกลับถึง Daoist651031Ch 4 Way towards shellstown
- rimuru_1231yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh -2 Harem
- rimuru_1231yrตอบกลับถึง batman_3_3_
yeah bro I know but in starting it is as introduced as one 🙂
'Any wish ?' ~ 'My devil fruit should be hybrid between rubber-rubber fruit and rumble-rumble fruit' - rimuru_1231yrตอบกลับถึง neis_marko
Not all them but some them will be in harem. I am planning on 15-20 members in the crew of the strawhat pirats, so there will be only 15-20 members in harem. May be it will change in the future as story progress but for now I only thought about 15-20 members.
Ch 2 Training