Madamaru
I'm a god. How can you kill a god? What a grand and intoxicating innocence. I'm a god. How can you kill a god? Shame on you, sweet Nerevar.
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Other than the repeating part of the 1st chapter (which I have read), I like the writing quality! I like how you post so frequently, but don't overwhelm yourself if it proves to be a lot. Characters seem alright and nothing out of the norm. I like how you introduce us with something strange, almost alien-like which captivated everyones' attention but most of them lose interest and go back to their work. Seems pretty reasonable, but honestly I'd think the kids sitting by the window would still peak at what's going on, no? Overall, pretty good. Solid 4.0.
Read along further. The MC is not an isekai himself, but there are major characters who have plot relevance that are. I know it's a little confusing looking at it in the first chapter but trust me, it makes more sense going down the road.
Hai, hai, update from author boy here. In the past, I have lost motivation for this novel due to personal reasons I will not disclose here. I understand some of you may have dropped this novel, but please come back! After re-reading my content I've felt a fire rekindle inside of me which makes me want to continue this novel. I shall pick up from where we left off and continue Fenris's journey! By the way, I've started a new novel as well, called "From the Depths to Beyond", which is in a more contemporary setting, and involves a less heroic protagonist. Perhaps that's more your taste? Go ahead and read it now then! https://www.webnovel.com/book/from-the-depths-to-beyond_27548759805848905
I plan to reveal the mother's past as the story goes along. I won't make a whole new chapter BEFORE Chapter 1 and go through the brain teaser that is organizing everything. However, as the MC ages I'll have him learn more and more about his origins. Thanks for your review! And I hope that you enjoy reading my novel as I progress it along.
"Kazuto"......SUS