"I am nothing but a refracted illusion of your own tortured psyche, my dearest..." ~Quote from Bleak Midwinter
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lmfao, his povs will come here and there for sure
So far you have captured it well, but "A low exhale" does not convey anything. I mean, I get it, but from a narration perspective, you should add something like a low exhale escaped my lips or smth like that; you get the gist of it
The dichotomy of darkness and light is nice, but a little more explanation would've been nice. Although, I think webnovel format stories are not supposed to do that.
Nice. Now...
Generally speaking, it's not your head, it's the veins in your temple, but he won't able to tell since he's blo*dy dying, lmao
Finance is hard, it's a constant headache. I myself have one charter (ACCA) and am going for CFA now, and the headache and crash-outs are real. Makes you wanna jump off a building or something.
stock market is hell.
Sword scattering to the ground isn’t the right word. We use scatter generally for multiple objects. Clunked, clattered would be more appropriate
Or you’re just sour that he doesn’t have en edgy skill like the “devourer of heavens”