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El_Famoso4 months agoCommentedPlease author, go easy on the anaphoras. It’s alright once in a while, but not three times in every chapter. It’s becoming more and more cringey.
- El_Famoso4 months agoCommented
Author must be a fun guy to hang out with
- El_Famoso5 months agoPosted
Sounds promising, knowing that the author rarely disappoints ! I will wait until there are at least 50 chapters to binge-read them.
- El_Famoso5 months agoCommented
Haldir ? Author, please make an effort !
- El_Famoso6 months agoCommented
Wait, what about Kugelblitz’s hero and Ghosty ? That’s confusing
- El_Famoso7 months agoCommented
Ponzi scheme haiya
- El_Famoso7 months agoCommented
Please, author : les filler and more action !!
- El_Famoso10 months agoCommented
Titus, not Torne. Wrong novel ! It should be I Became a Mafia Boss in Another World.
- El_Famosoa year agoReplied to Epic_Child
It’s a stylistic device
- El_Famosoa year agoCommented
« With our super strong bodies » it’s okay to increase word count reasonably, since your income depends on it, but when you add these kinds of annoying expressions, the readers will quickly get sick of the novel. One full chapter to describe a very short, almost instantaneous fight…