Alan_Grimlord
Favorite novel series: I am Number four Favorite web novel: Lotm Noble In Black (no longer uploading) Grave Borne Revenant (ongoing) i was born and raised in Jamaica go read my book Please :)
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I dropped the novel because I lost interest in it and also because I didn't know what I was doing the story is not so great so thanks to those who have read this series. if you want to read more of my works then Read Grave Borne Revenant. That story is way better, there are still some mistakes and some small retcons but I found a way to make them work at this time 4/12/24 Volume one is almost over also because i didn't upload for an entire month the chapters are free so I suggest that you catch up to it now
and just like that we are close to the end of volume one, sadly I had to rush it because I'm kinda messing up the world a bit too much I wanted to do more but if I stayed writing volume one then I would have dropped this series I already take to much breaks on this series. id say volume one will have about a hundred chapters
Thanks 🙏 i keep spelling that word wrong any way what do you think of the story so far?
Yep i should probably go and fix that💀
series has the potential to be good. All you have to do is -make the MC have a steady power growth -add something unique other than magic that sets your world apart from other novels -add some Complex or better ideas to the magic system because, from what I've read so far, the series kind of feels like I've already read it before. Don't put any dam hearm or else I will come for you that's kinda all I got for ya buddy. You have potential but don't be lazy and add shitty concepts that's already been done a thousand times I actually want you to grow as a writer, so please think over your chapter before you continue to write. also add more unique concepts and systems to the world[img=recommend]
if this turns into a hearm im outta here
Nahhhhhhh thats crazy