Hahaha man, its fresh for me with that old man bast*rd. But every chapter its to short. How much word it takes ? less than 1000 ? i think its better you make for more than 1000 word per chapter

Not gonna lie its literally just a crap. from me the writer '-'

i just read 10 chapter so far, except from character desain everything seems good for me. Maybe its just early part of this novel, i will back again after i finish latest chapter.

It's 9. He's lying to Berto