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With just the 13 free chapters available, it's extremely evident chatGPT did a lot of the heavy lifting while writing this novel. The concept is very interesting, and the first few chapters are by far the best simply because it's not extremely evident that it was made using AI or with help from it, but after the initial introduction, roughly around chapter 6, its just a slog of AI generated topics with a few changes made here and there by the author so it would fit the story, before changing into an AI generated exchange between characters. It wouldn't be an issue using AI if the chapters were at the very least engaging to read, but the amount of repetition and useless back and forth, combined with the massive amounts of flavor text that is simply there to increase wordcount, just really kills it. I'm not reading past the free chapters, and I can't really recommend it either, unless you don't mind the AI. if anyone decides to do it: beware of heavy text dumps and poorly explained exposition.
Bringer of misfortune.
...author?the author forgot the names, we're doomed.I did too actually
bro vibranium cheeks had me dying.don't think it... don't say it...
It's... cat ears, who doesn't like cats??? there's many reasons.
It is the other way around, it was clearly stated that a white star, aka full star is worth 1 while the dark star, aka empty star is worth 0.5, it wasn't said this way but the meaning is the same.so, dark start is half, white star is one, exactly the other way around.
It's the other way around, actually.
well I can understand that, webnovel has a very low entry bar so it's not uncommon to see that sometimes, just wanted to point it out.I'd offer help with the english but I doubt you'd accept and I don't really have much time right now.keep writing though, it's better than MTL at least.
internet slang is when people want to type faster and end up shortening the words used, for example "you" being turned into "u" and "why" being turned into just "y", it's very informal and VERY improper in any setting other than communication.