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Was here only to read at first but now Im gonna try my hand at writing

2022-12-30 เข้าร่วมแล้วUnited States
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    ตอบกลับถึง Juan_Garay_0225

    thanks for your imput

    Ch 7 Reflections and meeting with the council
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    ตอบกลับถึง Juan_Garay_0225

    sorry you think that, feel like telling why?

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    ตอบกลับถึง Devils_and_angels

    they are vegetarian aang has said so multiple times

    'Also I really do love meat too much to give it up' jon thought with a smile on his face
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    ตอบกลับถึง Alucard_7894

    thank you for your imput, here's my thought process when I wrote this. Ace was blown away with a very powerful attack so everyone assumed he wouldn't get back up from an attack like that so In the minds of everyone he was pretty much dealt with, and after all the other goons were detained everyone dropped their guards, and at first I was just gonna have sister lily fade in the background never to be seen again after jon moved on from the orphanage. But then i thought instead of having her fade in the background why not just kill her off, not only would it be the perfect catalyst for jon's spirit awakening but it would also remind jon that his actions have consequences and in a superpowered world it can result in death.

    Ch 6 sacrifice, rage, and spirits
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    ตอบกลับถึง Gordo_Divu
    "RAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"
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    good story so far hope you continue to update it[img=update][img=update][img=update]

    DC One For All
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    ตอบกลับถึง daniel_rahn

    same, thats why out of all the story ideas I have I decided to put this one out first

    Ch 3 Progress and confrontation
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    ตอบกลับถึง Theo_Miller

    I'll admit that I didn't think that far when I decided to add the rasengan, but this comment definitely gave me a few ideas

    "Rasangan!!!" Jon yelled as he ran towards ace and hits ace's stomach with the sphere.
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    ตอบกลับถึง Ethan_Venable

    😈

    "Thank you sir-" the man couldn't finish because an earth spike shot up from the floor and stabbed him through the chest killing him instantly
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    ตอบกลับถึง Alucard_7894

    I'm going to cover this in the next chapter stay tunned

    Ch 5 The hunt begins
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    ตอบกลับถึง daniel_rahn

    well no one knows the future but I have no plans on dropping anytime soon, thanks for your support

    Ch 3 Progress and confrontation
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    ตอบกลับถึง Blazingreads

    I'll try, i have the bad habbit of not re-checking my work

    Ch 2 Republic city and training
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    ตอบกลับถึง celestialshadows1

    I'll think about it im kinda writing as I go so it all depends on my writing speed and thank you for the support

    Ch 1 Rebirth
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    ตอบกลับถึง Alucard_7894

    Im deff gonna do a time skip, for the rest of you're question wait and see[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

    Ch 2 Republic city and training
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    ตอบกลับถึง Alucard_7894

    I normally dont like to spoil my stories but yes korra will be the love intrest.

    Ch 2 Republic city and training
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    Author here just a primary review I have alot of ideas for this story, I wanted to wait to sort them all out before writing but fuck it ive seen other authors put out worse so all I can say in this moment is try to enjoy what I write and CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM is always appreciated ✌

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    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    first option pls

    Ch 30 Question
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    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    yay your back I thought you abandoned this story also thanks for the chapter

    Ch 14 14
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    ตอบกลับถึง Eaglestriker_22

    no pressure dude, i understand how hard writing is. you're doing great in my opinion keep up the quality content

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    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    thanks for the shoutout and your other book was top notch just like this one [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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