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good chapter even if i didn't like the mc i would like you to explain why he lives his life following someone else's ideals since at the moment it only seems like he is a child following his father's rules instead of living and make your own decisions so doing that would make mc much better hope you keep up the great work
honestly i was really excited when i saw this story but after seeing the mc and the way he thinks and acts i really started to lose the will to read this story but i'll wait a few more chapters to see what happens i hope you get it making the mc not look like an idiot who speaks his mind without any kind of filter and doesn't fight back even though he's beaten up for no reason and his father's excuse is pretty ridiculous in my opinion
Derrick Rose, Ja Morant e Russell Westbrook he's basically going to be a very athletic player who's going to have great dribbling skills being very good at finishing close to the rim whether it's very acrobatic layups or rough dunks I also want him to have decent defense he's not going to be a spectacular defender but he's not going to being a gap in the defense the same goes for the shot that will be in theory his weakness since at most he will be an above average shot
if he really gives up on being the heir just because he is worried about the reaction of others it will be very frustrating since he doesn't seem to know that in 129 AC a war is going to start and unless he is too dumb to think that does he have any chance of not participating in the war no speech that pduring the war several bastards had dragons