Sorry, I ran into some issues and couldn't continue.but I really was disrespectful to readers by not disclosing anything. However, I'm working on a new fanfic, and I should post it only when everything is complete, to avoid dropping it. The new fanfic is going to be a little different, trying to explore the wizarding world and the underworld when not at Hogwarts.

If I'm going to make a system like the one I mentioned. It's pretty simple, it would work more like a self-analysis skill. He could monitor everything he learned and thus make tests of how to improve certain points. Anyway, thanks for the time, I have most of the beginning ready, after a review and improving some points, maybe I will ask you to read it if you are interested

At first my desire was to make a system that would only tell you how your level of mastery in spells is. As if the system was only there to understand where to improve. It would be something more useful just in the beginning. Then maybe I could evolve to do more things. The point is that this system, it would be the protagonist himself who would do a magic using the logic of the systems, to help him.

Then I was thinking of writing about a reincarnated protagonist but without memories of the books (due to something in the plot or not). Thus, he would still see the magic through another vision, but he would have no plot information. Another thing I was thinking about while writing an outline, was whether or not I would insert a System into the story, I see that many people like that in stories. Though I have to say it's hard to nerf systems from the little I've written...

I understood. Well, I wanted to make sure the protagonist doesn't have the memories from the books, so he can live and make friends naturally. Knowing the plot type forces you to make a decision about whether or not to change the canon. I want him to interfere in the story, but as something natural, as the moment a new look at the canon choices comes up, things change even if subtly.

I'm writing a new fanfic, but I only want to post it when it's ready, or almost. A quick doubt would it be better for the protagonist to have his memories and remember the original plot of the books, or if well written, could he be a character without the memories? I'm in doubt if for fanfic, character without memories would be good to read.What do you think ?

and you stayed and waited, thanks for that

Obrigado pelo comentário, sou brasileiro sim. Bom saber que outros BR estão lendo minha fanfic também. Qualquer sugestão é sempre bem-vinda.

loved

I couldn't add new tags, or I don't know how to do it or it's a bug, I can never put a new one.... I'll try again later

I liked that, it makes me think of what she was like before her mother died. Everyone deals with loss in a different way, this may be the way she does.... I am sad now.

I will use this. But it serves only in the common form of physical training, reaching a limit one day. I want to do something beyond that, maybe experiments or something.

I looked at your profile. you only speak ill of everything, you must be a virgin and needy

Yes.

Not sure, but that's how Jk wrote it. If I had to guess, it's because a person doesn't just have to see death, he has to feel it too.

Dumbledore and Voldemort would beat Adam without breaking a sweat. Adam only hurt Dumbledore, because the world attacked Dumbledore, at that moment Adam was connected with the world, his magic was at a level he can't reach alone yet. As for adding things, I need ideas, and I'm still a little unsure what I can write without readers hating it. But I think I can think of some new conflict to add to the story. Thanks for the sugestion. If you have something in mind, comment that I can write about

Harry can only see the trestals after Cedric's death.

Yes. I would say most of the time Dumbledore is sad. The choices he made during his life made him have guilt and sadness on his mind all the time.

definitely not. I hated that arc, the sins.

Time doesn't matter if the focus was never looking for it. Philosopher's Stone, Voldemort, three-headed dog. Sounds like a lot to think about, aside from Quidditch lessons and stuff.