Great story keep it up author 👍🏻. ................,.....,...,............................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,, , , ,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,., ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,,..,,.,.,.,.,..,,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,,.,.,.

All said and done, but when is the next chapter coming?😅✌🏻

Please don't end it like this.

Author you dog . You rewrite a story and change it into a incest story huh. You got some taste there my dear author. But ohh well enjoyed it so far and hope it's worth it to rewrite and reread it in the future well best of luck author.

Don't mind Don't mind

Nice chapter

Hey author I am giving you 5 star so please don't drop this story and complete it the right way ........................ .......................,................................................................................................................

A very interesting read I must say. Story is developing in a good manner not so fast and not so slow. Author is doing a great job well thanks for the read.

A very interesting take on this story. If author does not mess up and go with heat or make the MC rabbit and take every girl in site then this story can become very solid. Story has very high potential . But plz author make sure don't make the story wish fulfillment . All the best author.👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻🥸

You kept me waiting author 😃

hahaha 😂 nice one author , great do it as you like and let them see the light of the day . 👍🏻

yup I am with @badzingan

this one

This name seems interesting and you can use this name to add some jokes later too .

You took my stone now pay me with your story ....,.........,....................,........................................................................................................

Hey author just a few tip take it or not is upto you , so you know that the original story didn't show the Hindu and other mythology fully and the was very rush at the you can feel it . So take your time building the world and uncover the story that original author didn't get to do ✌🏻✌🏻😁

I like this story very much , author did a really good job writing the story..,......,...................... .,..... .........,........................................................................

Author Chapter was as interesting as always 👍🏻 . Keep it up my blessings ie with you ✌🏻

Hello author great chapter but I do have a question. Like we all know who have been reading this story from the start that MC have "UZUMAKI" blood line so it means that he also have "ADAMANTINE CHAIN " right ??!!

Some of my thoughts on this chapter author. Good work there it was quite fun read. As always I can't wait to read more 😩