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Itsurbff_who_reads

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I love reading as you can tell cuz I’m on this app 😌 Btw read “Mors Aranea Academy” it’s my new book. Thx!

2022-07-16 เข้าร่วมแล้วIreland
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34.3h

ของการอ่าน

152

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7

โมเมนต์

130
  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    Are there more chapters in the privileges? I can't wait for the next update! Please update!

    Ch 94 Choices Lead to Outcomes
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    If I'm Male, I Can Avoid a Yandere, Right?
    สมัยใหม่ · SkyHighLimits
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    I hate Ryuu for some reason..I feel likee he isn't goodd for Haru and he hasn't changed. He may become abusive In the future...

    Ch 92 Quite the Morning
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    If I'm Male, I Can Avoid a Yandere, Right?
    สมัยใหม่ · SkyHighLimits
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    This story is well developed and written well. It has a good story concept and character build. The MC definitely has a realistic personality that most books don’t have. I love the ethnicity that you show with her being Spanish. You don’t see that in many books, it’s definitely a fresh outlook on a character. The world building is great, it’s the real world so of course. There are a few grammer mistakes but overall this book is great! I hope you get somewhere in writing and keep updating! I can’t wait for the next update!

    altalt
    Being Repulished
    สมัยใหม่ · Alexalee_25
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    The storyline seems good, as does the plot. The world building is unique but I have seen this concept a few times. There has been slight development in the story which is good. Character design is great, the basic character personality is displayed. Overall this story is good. Though the first chapter is bland and the grammar and punctuation need fixing. Also maybe try giving your character a realistic personality rather than a happy or determined one, that has been seen in protagonists a lot. Good book though.

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    The Tale Of The Worst One
    แฟนตาซี · Sandipan_Dutta_7440
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    Good chapter

    Ch 1 Prologue: History of the four Kingdoms
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    The Tale Of The Worst One
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Alexalee_25

    Thank you!

    altalt
    Mors Aranea Academy.
    แฟนตาซี · Itsurbff_who_reads
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Flower_Something

    Thank you!

    altalt
    Mors Aranea Academy.
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    This book is good. It has a good plot yet lacks many things. There needs to be less author notes in the middle of the story, it is rather annoying. Maybe also fix some grammatical mistakes. I’d advice grammerly. Try adding more of the setting so we can imagine where it is taking place. The character design is interesting keep it up. Overall it’s good, just needs polishing.

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    Magic Hitman
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
    ตอบกลับถึง FunniestGuy

    Thank you! Bestow friendooo Yuji-kun!

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    Mors Aranea Academy.
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
    ตอบกลับถึง konza

    You used “ at the start of the sentence and ended it with ‘

    ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว
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    Rise of the Looper
    แฟนตาซี · konza
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    Wow he went from 😨 to 💪 in a few chaptersc

    Ch 6 Survival 101
    altalt
    Rise of the Looper
    แฟนตาซี · konza
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    Oohhh 😱

    ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว
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    Rise of the Looper
    แฟนตาซี · konza
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    Hmm 🤔

    Ch 3 Cause & Effect
    altalt
    Rise of the Looper
    แฟนตาซี · konza
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    These characters aren’t allowed…

    ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว
    altalt
    Rise of the Looper
    แฟนตาซี · konza
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    Different speech marks.

    ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว
    altalt
    Rise of the Looper
    แฟนตาซี · konza
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    Good chapter. 👍

    Ch 1 Desolation
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    Rise of the Looper
    แฟนตาซี · konza
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    Oop- she’s gonna see her neighbour very soon isnt she?

    Ch 2 Departure (Part 2)
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    Eterna: The Cursed Executioner
    แฟนตาซี · zawkey
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    Yea! You tell her!

    ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว
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    Eterna: The Cursed Executioner
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    Lol 😂

    ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว
    altalt
    Eterna: The Cursed Executioner
    แฟนตาซี · zawkey
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  • Itsurbff_who_reads
    Itsurbff_who_reads1yr
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    Good chapter 😊

    Ch 5 Evolution and Oath
    altalt
    Titanomachia: Seed of Yggdrasil
    แฟนตาซี · Eaneas
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