TempestOfThoughts

While I like the setting of the story I encourage the author to add some life and twists to the story instead of filling with cliches. The author should try diverge in stories and characters than just background setting from other popular tropes. Plot armor should be reduced so there’s some tension, or atleast some mystery.

It is a good webnovel but it you cannot handle cringey half romantic half bullshit jargon then it's better not to read it .it was good in starting but now it's all about random forced lovey dovey aarguments and bullshit. Not much development. The author has changed his style for the worst. you will hate it when you realise you cannot read anymore just because the author wants to force trivial conversation for pages milking readers for the money.