Thanks man. this means a lot. I'm gonna ask. if possible Is there any thing you tell me about the book or the characters that you didn't like or didn't see that you wanted to. something I missed that you as the reader felt should have been there. And was there any of the characters that you felt wasn't well written (Except Molliwag. he was very intentionally written off.) of course Amy thoughts you have is appreciated

It started out normal and good. then suddenly it became a Chinese sappy tale

Now, this, Is a script worthy line.

yes. it was well written. Even wanted him to accept Audrina too. which I would never have done in another poorly written harem story. The entire book was lovely. I hardly comment a review. but I just had to. this is the first book where I didn't fill annoyed the harem was spoiling the story. it all fit perfectly . Thank you

I normally dislike harems because it's always stupid. But Author made it perfect in this book. Love how there's a good reason for each wife and how he's not a fly abuzz. You made this book perfect Author.

get used to it.

It also gets old.

kinda cringe good plot but poor writing.

it's two points for completing daily quests

sometimes I find the dialogues that some authors use to be distasteful and unreal.

Alright. Had to call down to draft a good argument But. You're right I guess. I'm not really a good writer. This is just a hobby. Something I find fun, writing my thoughts that is. Characters like The administrators are those whom I consider my worst work because I didn't know how to portray them. Holloway has a set arc, which is not now. As for description and races. Dude I don't really know how to get anyone to do that for me. Like I said it's a hobby not a work. Heck, I don't even care for a contract. I just write this to escape reality. So im not bothered about getting a good artist or whatever to create art for me. How am I gonna pay for that? It's not on my budget. Just trying to make sure I get enough character development on Hilde. That alone is hard to note. As for Verbiage. Had to look that up and honestly I don't know which words are considered over much or utilized. I hope you get this. This is not a job for me. I don't care for anyone to read or not. I just enjoy writing and obviously I'm not good at it but it's relaxing and addicting. So yeah. Hope you stick around to see more of this mess. 😁

Thanks for the Review.

well. To answer your question. Yes. I already have something in mind for Eternity and Death. As for Dream and Desire and the rest. Well that I can work on.

Spoiler : Eternity falls and Death comes unless the cycle is maintainedm

*Facepalm* She won't have to .atleast not for all

Excuse me. Are you male or female?.

Thought of that. But the ending was otherwise. So purging would be heavy considering what she actually wants.

shocked me too

🤣🤣

If being petty was a God then those divine entities bagged it. I'm definitely reading this book because of this synopsis. 🤣. That entity better be good of pettiness.