donut_obsessed

It’s a translation of an mtl so can’t expect much But good work author😺

Your writing skills are ok, but I don’t see the story going anywhere, u lack creativity and why choose kizaru power from one piece when you can choose way better ones [img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud] Overall - Average

No he didn’t take it out, inventory’s locked and no need for explanation cause the crate’s hidden

Her house and can’t sneak all the time right

Sorry man my finals are going on so can’t give a regular update

Will probably try to release more chapters I’ll try to increase to 2 per week and rarely 3. But don’t expect much I’m still a novice.[img=recommend]

Dragon from one piece-“Doragon”

Wait a sec….this a Jeremy Clarkson reference 👌

Please don’t make it a harem we already have enough of them

bro why they talking in hindhi when they are living in rameshwaram