seriously if people started writing novels like this only to become famous then web novel is in deep trouble . because it's to good. I had to force myself to not read this. otherwise all my coins will be lost someday

seriously

I will be honest with myself with the review. and also like to tell everyone that second volume would be more than just college . in this volume Ethan would stay alone most of times . and some secret's will come to light at the end of the volume . I hope you guys just stay around give your support and if you any suggestions about the story you can tell me the comment section thankyou

hey brother , in this chapter i couldn't use chat gpt for correction so you found mistakes but after this chapter i have corrected the mistakes so pls check it out without any worries

his actuall Chinese name is yu zhou and universe was his nickname in his last life. but the meaning are same. if you translate yu zhou in English it means universe . as for Ethan it was my mistake this name belongs to my other book. it just got mixed up in it. sorry once again and pls let me know if any other mistakes you found in the future.. and thank you reading my book.

even you want to write this kind of novel , just make it pure. don't abuse it. sorry if you don't like my comments . but it's only my opinion

loved so far , only the paragraphs are really disturbing that's all. thanks for showing us another side of the same world in stories

hello if you are a female writer then let me you sister and you are male then bro. just keep the paragraph short will ya. it's way to long. but everything else is fine

sorry for Disappointing grammar but I just resently started using chat gpt after 27 chapters . and you are right I just started learning English a year ago. and i think I am doing pretty good so far. as for system and Ethans , they just made fun of each other maybe i was unable to bring out their funny moments as of yet. but in the future i will try to improve it. as for predictable storyline it was just a introduction volume. from 2nd volume the real deal will start from college to depth of the forest, with unique monsters to legendary creatures . and ofcourse scum of the society. but thanks for the review anyway

sorry, I know my grammar is horrible, and in the starting chapters I didn't use AI for correction. but don't worry as I get the chance I will improve it. just don't give up on this book .

sorry, I must have made a mistake while typing . and thank you for reading my book

then i think can give it a trying thanks for the spoiler

it's a nice book and the start is also perfect but you put the story in our planet Earth which I don't like reading about. sorry it not your fault but I just don't like this . it's enough for me to live my life in reality but novel I love to explore another place different world with there uniqueness about it. your book is good but unfortunately I can't read it

different dragons have same power why?

hello friend for now don't worry about the review just focus on grinding . the more chapters you have the more people will view this book. i like the story btw. upload soon.

one question will this novel go into space aswell. or you will going to finish the story like that other novel. where he just built a spaceship and the story finished .if it's like that then I don't want to read this book.

I like how you put work into the chapters , pls don't stop your story like the others.

no, it's actually thanks to you. I am following your advice

for now yes, but later it's going to be more complicated than a system

I was going to increase it many fold but someone advised me against it . because in the later chapters it's going to be difficult that's i set it at only double