It’s a very good FF with good grammar and good writing i only need more FF like this

I see a lot of potential here please don’t drop

Perfect, this is literally how it should be mha, this is one of the most perfect FF that i read

I don't know if it's me but this chapter felt better than the last one.

They are good but feel a little robotic, maybe expressing the feelings of others a little more while being more detailed would be a great improvement although it doesn't have to be overly descriptive and exaggerated like AI or Chinese novels do.

It looks promising although it needs more polish and a synopsis, also knowing about the characters' thoughts and explaining things better instead of making the story move so quickly since it can become confusing or seem robotic although the story and the idea I still find it interesting even though it seems like it was done in a hurry way. I hope I don't repeat myself too much, but lastly I hope the author doesn't take the comment the wrong way because I just want to see this story continue.

the story is going well but it doesn't make any sense for spider man to feel Aizawa's blows, I mean Spider man lifts tons and as a pillar for buildings he has even been able to lift helicopters with just his brute strength, so he can feel Aizawa's blows, Aizawa should be able to lift cars with one hand (Even if he is a young Spider-Man, he still has tremendous strength and he shouldn't feel anything from Aizawa's blows, even if he is injured with a finger, he could stop any of Aizawa's attacks)

The story was pretty good but thanks I guess and I hope you continue with the story

It is an FF with a great idea that is quite well executed, good grammar and logic in the story and it has a very good chapter update even though the chapters are not short.

Thanks for the chapter

It is one of the best stories I have read and with a good protagonist who, although he is not Dante, is quite good and realistic, I do not understand the criticisms that say that he is not Dante and cry at us because he is not op and he becomes the king of the world in wait a minute, I mean if it were like that the novel would last two chapters for God if you want to see someone broken without any justification in the second chapter go see average isekais

In my opinion, it would not be like that exactly since although it is a cursed technique, the creation of the purple works through the combination of both, not through the creation of cursed energy, so that the reason why the purple requires cursed energy, in others words to understood a little more. The purple required cursed energy is because the components to have it require cursed energy but since here those components do not require cursed energy, purple does not require it since according to what I know neither Gojo nor anything in the manga mentions that purple requires something more than blue and red, and never say things like the purplu required put in him blue, red and cursed energy

The purple one doesn't require that much energy, it's just throwing a blue and red together. So he could think beyond what the system tells him and see how to go further on his own. You already know, how to throw a blue and a red into the air and have them collide to create a purple in true Satoru Gojo style.

If he suffers a little damage but much less compared to others because it is his own technique and he can manipulate it in the air like Gojo does against Sukuna and explodes a purple against the two, in fact he could have manipulated the red and say his incantation to regain his strength and return it to the nomu to save energy

Also infinity should be able to stop this if used correctly (Gojo even used it as a gas mask) however, it should not be able to stop abilities like Aizawa's that only require seeing it.

I'm just going to add that Gojo could make the infinity also work to filter the air, preventing chemicals or poisons from passing through the infinity but allowing the air to pass through. pos data he achieves this when he is older since he began to be able to do this after the fight with Toji due to how complicated it became for him, these being one of the three things that he did not completely master after being able to use the reverse technique (that and teleportation as the extension of mastery) although when he is older I am supposed to master it completely

If you have the blue and red you should be able to use the purple, since if you combine them when you throw them even if you don't have the technique they should create a purple one when they collide

I had that problem but I solved it by sending the image to a computer and updating it on it although this is in case you try to do it on your cell phone and if that doesn't work for you I don't know what to do but I hope the comment helps you