*Got into a fight Not get, the grammar matters when it comes to statements of context.

If you're going to describe a character, add a comma. For example... Jonathan Preston, the ex-FSU... You feel me?

Also it's "a lab leak", to lessen confusion with the grammar.

Make it a bit more formal by saying "one" instead of 1, depending on the statement.

Make sure the 'titled' "Scorching Virus" has capital letters in the first character of the two words. So it won't confuse the readers.

*that can make the human body burn It's not a past statement, so it should be burn, and not burnt. Because it's in present statement.

The story was well written, barely any grammatical errors. The plot is amazing. It's not like any other war/military story, it gives encouragement, overpowerment, and motivational inspiration to those who want to have a good time feeling ecstatic to the readers viewing your book!

It should be "Blood for blood, kin for kin" add a coma. If you want you can always go check out Punctuation Checker when manually editing. It works better than Grammarly, just click look up than deep look up. It's very simple yet the most useful.

Read further when I publish future updates which will be every 9 AM in (GMT+8) Timezone. , the main theme of the story isn't sci-fi, it's a pilot volume which means it's not canon but they are connected to the rest of the other 5 future volumes, soon. Spoilers, the main plot of the novel in the second volume is about a vampire with a psychological disorder and can infect his insanity to other people.

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LMAO THERE ARE PLENTY MORE PLOT TWISTS YOU WONT EXPECT THE MORE YOU READ XD

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I'm sorry if it sounds cringy :sob:

Of course! Just to pay back what I owe

OMG! Thanks for so much support by giving a 5 star review and commenting on many of my chapters and paragraphs! I appreciate it! <3 Thank you!!!

It's pretty good! Although, despite the fact that it has a lot of information of what's going on, there is little to no description of how readers can visualize it. You have to balance between informing and describing the scene. The grammar and punctuation is almost perfect. But it has no imagination. You have to imagine and visualize what's happening in the novel like a movie and describe as much as you can on what you see on what is going around it. And make it sound poetic too. Describing the character's clothing, the setting, the time and date, the character's actions and adding details on what they are doing, and needs a bit more dialouge than just merely information of sentences. A novel isn't a novel without describing what it looks like than just informing. I hope this helps!

I know there aren't anything here yet. But thanks for giving me powerstones! XD I bet this one book is gonna be great! Thanks for supporting me, mate! Cheers. Add me on discord! some edgelord, barely online#1210

It's pretty good! I love it. I'm looking forward for more updates very soon. Keep it up. You're doing great and soon you'll get the recognition you deserve.

IM PROUD OF YOU! The student surpasses the teacher. This had been the most perfect novel I've seen in my life! no grammar mistakes and the use of vocabulary is just fantastic!

You said you're a newbie writer.... how ate you this good?! its so shocking that you write so much better than me!! the grammar is perfect and everything is polished the vocabulary and use of words are fantastic! Mei my love you did a great job you make me proud! love you!