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Good face slapping is in forecast...

I agree...it's really sad to see that shi quiang has no eye candy to look at that isn't crazy about our mc....

Please dont apologise!....and sorry for your loss...I am enjoying this novel and it's plots a lot. So please don't be down about it. I also have to say that writing is a lot more difficult than critically analysing...so you are doing great 👍 I am yet to find a novel that gets my attention like yours😁😁

Hello 👋 this book looks great...I am on my first chapter and I usually don't post reviews but this book has caught my attention. Hope to see more!!

This is just cruel why do this to my poor heart.... also I don't mean to be too critical, but a few chapters back the lack of love into the writing could be felt....like you got bored of writing but you have to because they add to the later chapters.... though frankly I loved this arc a loooooot like enough that I would love for it to be a separate story of its own....but a few places it felt like the scenes moved too fast...and it's not really your fault too...as a story that could be a stand alone it's difficult to cut and piece together while maintaining a continuum all the while making sure that the major plot points are secured. This is just my uneducated opinion- I would say that a little more prepration towards such long arcs would probably be a lesser headache in that manner and you wouldn't have to think a lot about what to keep and what to throw. Like in this arc the story could go so many ways and I feel you did an amazing job taking it where you did...but it looked like it was a diamond mine and you wanted to take too many of them at once...again this is my uneducated opinion and honestly I loved what I read. And would continue to faithfully read further as well. I wish there were more ways to support you (I am poor😭😭) also I am new here so I don't really know how much a power stone or energy stone would help...I try my best to comment and review...