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maki!
This fanfiction has developed in a good way, I mean I like it where you show Naruto's strength and emotional development in detail and I think the storyline is right , the storyline should be tagged 'slice of life' which I know and then don't forget the development of the side characters which makes me appreciate your work, good job
This fanfiction has developed in a good way, I mean I like it where you show Naruto's strength and emotional development in detail and I think the storyline is right , the storyline should be tagged 'slice of life' which I know and then don't forget the development of the side characters which makes me appreciate your work, good job
I thought this would be good but after seeing chapter 1 it made me a little annoyed, you know gomu gomu I mean hito hito nomi Nika's mode is very strong and she replaced it with something come on bjng instead of throwing away the real fruit why not give the MC a physical Who can eat two devil fruits like black beard
I think Iruma's world doesn't need to have a gender reversal or change because it's already perfect, it's just that if it's a gender bend then I will gender bender one of the characters from the Naruto world, namely Sasuke, I think Sasuke needs to change his gender to be a woman so they (Naruto and Sasuke become perfect team mate) So if one day I make a Naruto fanfic then I will change Sasuke's gender to make Naruto's world even more interesting
eh sorry typo