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Potato_killer1hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 13 Chapter 13: How its going- Potato_killer2hตอบกลับถึง Potato_killer
The plant above ground can get fairly big
Five minutes later, the potato seedlings had grown to half a person's height. - Potato_killer2hตอบกลับถึง Ahmed_Koroma_1382Five minutes later, the potato seedlings had grown to half a person's height.
- Potato_killer4hตอบกลับถึง SoBored
The only time the it was a female pronoun used was when the preist was introdused and it said preistess the rest of the times this caracter has been mentioned it was with male pronounces.(sorry for bad english)
He vaguely remembered that when he inherited the priesthood, the flame he ignited in the stone brazier was only a few inches high. However, the former priest praised him and said he would lead the tribe to prosperity. - Potato_killer1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Wouldnt she be his niece and not his cousin?
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Potato_killer1dตอบกลับถึง Sato_Shiii
Original female? Maybe…
I saw a bunch of Shadinja waiting for us beside Hades, Phantump, and our female Shadinja. Shadinja (OF) introduced them as the elders of their tribe. They requested to be shown the blessed space that Shadinja (OF) mentioned and promised to lead the whole tribe there if it was true. Honestly, their request, or rather the offer they gave in return, took me off guard. Here I was hoping that I would be able to persuade a fourth or third of the tribe to join me, but they were directly offering themselves up in a wholesale manner. - Potato_killer3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 13 Chapter 13: How its going
- Potato_killer3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 12 Chapter 12: First Thoughts on Adaptation
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- Potato_killer10dตอบกลับถึง Plottergeist
I thought that the power system was fairly interesting, his «relationship» with that girl felt like a little rushed but you wrote it in a way that made it feel less rushed (if that makes sense). I dont quite remember how the system worked but he received blueprints like way to easily. Anyways, if you feel like rewriting then you do that. I for one believe that you potentially have a good story here. Ps. Apologies if this was hard to understand. English is my third language.(and im writing on my phone)
Ch 1 Chapter 1: Body Mender - Potato_killer11dตอบกลับถึง Sudhanva_SH
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'Joe deary.' - Potato_killer12dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
He could say that he was observing how their language worked, to learn it. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
The Paru hadn't found a good excuse for that yet. - Potato_killer12dตอบกลับถึง Supreme_slothful
He didnt lock it the last time he went there with the key. So when that twink came and was a weirdo, the cell door wasnt locked.
He turned towards the female Granilith. She was frowning in her sleep. - Potato_killer13dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Meow?
Mothra/Butterfree and Hades/Gengar were like "{Oh, that's it}", while Thor was the opposite. "{Raikou damn it, another super lucky guy}," he grumbled, though I was not sure why he was complaining. Sure, he did not have a modifier, but he had a pretty good talent along with a psychic affinity, so he was pretty lucky/special as well. Shino on the other hand simply said "{That's nice}" before asking for details. - Potato_killer13dตอบกลับถึง Emp781
Its not a translation… its a fanfic, i dont understand what you mean. The MC of the original novel that this is a fanfic of is called Chen Chen
'Joe deary.'