XXShinigamiXX
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1977
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lol hahaha
it's real I once helped my classmate and seatmate a girl to edit an activity for school but when our teacher couple ship us she distanced herself a little bit and asked me in private whether I like her or not when in reality all I've been thinking at school was how to save my recess money so I can go to a computer shop after school
good choice man
did he have a devil fruit weakness?
the story was good MC was not a cold blooded killer he's kind to good people and a devil to his enemies the story was good his abilities were not something that just came out of air so it's good grammar was not bad it's a good fan fiction I suggest that you put image that shows appearance of MC and other oc and other objects so readers can look to it just reference
it is John Wayne gayce was a pedo he murder boys and mmmmmm you know that's one of a nightmare for boys
I object to redfield on Al the fanfics that I read it says that redfield fight with Kong of marine and garp arrived later and defeat redfield although garp defeated redfield there's no doubt that redfield was strong if you make redfield join the mc then it's like having your vc stronger than captain I suggest that although redfield would not join mc. Mc would still meet redfield make him his teacher or just acquaintance
I copied the color of shamba skin from one piece wiki
just imagine buggy like these since it's hard to imagine him being charismatic