Never expected I'd see a Zhu Xiangjun FF, but it's welcomed though. 🗣️🔥👑 (I deleted the old review since I wrote "Zhang Ming" instead of Zhu Xiangjun. 😅)

I've read an MTL of this before. The story had a good premise and a lot of potential, but the author ruined it because he went with the plot of the Marvel Cinematic Universe. That is not to say that it's bad, it's just that it could've been better if the author had gone with a different direction with the story. Also, if you want a slice of life-ish story, this is not for you. Much of the novel is composed of fighting against the US Government, alien forces, or whatever. However, I'd still recommend y'all to give this ago, it's fairly entertaining.

I thought he would have a water-type or some kind of liquid-based zanpakuto, but snow and wind are also good. This is cool.

You should update this and the other auxiliary chapter. An auxiliary chapter exclusive to Xuan Hao (age, cultivation progress, bit of backstory, disciples, techniques) would also be cool, especially the cultivation progress since it would kinda be like a timeline (easier to as well).

This is a cool chapter. I don't think I've ever read a TDG fanfiction that has explored a profession that isn't alchemy.

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Very nice story. Cool cultivation technique. 1234567912345679012345678901234567901234567890123456789012345678901234567890431234567890123456789012345678912345678

BTW, how many years have passed in the novel? Is Xuan Hao over 30-years-old now, or is he just under it?

Oh, yeah. What about Shi Feng's parents? I don't think RSSG's author has mentioned anything about them after some point in the novel.

Ayyy...!! That's Nie Yan's game username from Rebirth of the Thief Who Roamed the World!

One of the things I hope would happen in the story is that Xuan Hao would find and accept a disciple that is different from his normal disciples. Talent-wise, this disciple would be comparable to Xuan Hao's other disciple, but because this disciple 2as a loose cultivator, his/her cultivation would be lower than a disciple like Chu Yang and his/her age would be higher (nearly 30). And, because of his/her age, lifestyle and experiences, his/her suitable Daos would be different compared to most Daos we've encountered so far. Like, a Dao of Strength (a more raw type of Dao), Dao of Wrath (an emotion-based Dao), Dao of Insanity (maybe this is why he/she is a loose cultivator), or something along those lines.

The grammar is so ChatGPT. Like, it's too much, very annoying.

True.

they live in forests, i guess

This is probably how they separate the wheat from the chaff.

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BRUH

Same.

This is a solid novel. I love how the author brightened up the world-building in the Tiny World, and how he showed Zhu Long in a different light. And damn, what the author did to Nie Li was very, very unique; basically, fhe the first of its kind in any TDG fanfiction.