Sorry about that, it was my intention to simply space out the sentences… but after going back and re-reading the aforementioned chapter, I can see that is not how it turned out.

I’v heard bits and pieces from fan theories. im ’trying’ to keep the beginning explainations simple. ’cause Morax was the god of contracts before attaining archon status. And while I hope Genshin fans read my fan fic, im trying to keep it enjoyable for folks who haven’t played

I will try my best moving forward! I think the format changes when I upload chapters from my notes

Uh… thanks? When you have time, I’d appreciated an honest review

So…. have I improved on my needless spacing… or not? Lol. I acknowledge that when it comes to dialogue I still go sort of crazy. Atleast when it’s the same character speaking

😁 glad we are on the same page

So…. Venti, for all intents and purposes… is a guy

If I recall correctly,and I may be wrong but… technically speaking Venti is genderless

By far my worst trait! Thank you for the feed back

Thank you for the feed back!

I appreciate your feedback, thank you!

Libra, I was attempting something new! I figured it might draw the readers attention :)

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Apologies, not sure I understand… is there a typo I failed to correct?