Bro please stop, him training to gain control over only this much power is enough. if he was to given that much power then entire story would be him just trying to gain control over his own body. And all we would see is training arc. And this is the first time in my history where I'm seeing some MC learn to control their power like this. And another thing is the thing that makes Spiderman THE Spider-Man is his secret identity. Just search it up and you'll see only very selected few know of his identity. But here his power is shown in front of the world but it's also true that the scientists who did experiments on him know of his identity so they can still harm him so that's that.

Bro what about his memories? I know some trauma can cause temporally memory loss but like I said it's temporary and like how he got the memory of the body when transmigrating proves that he had the memory of his privious life and the current one with him but the experiment on him in lab made him forget all that but those kind of memories do comes back whenour mind subconsciously Starts believing that now it's host is strong enough to handle that drag. So is he going to get those or will stay like a clean slate he is now?

This narration is more like story telling than reading a book.

This is fire I'm telling you. It's so unique and never seen before that it would sell like rice crackers in market. (Sorry my inner capitalist came out there but really this fic is something)

Bro i don't know about others but i understood it in the first chapter that MC is either from SCP universe or something alike. So don't think its hard to understand MC's background. Because it's easy look even the peanut is agreeing with me 😂

Well speaking for myself I don't particularly like this kind of narration where we are seeing things from everyone's perspective because it makes it look like everyone is trying to get to MC in dark. And it also kills the suspense for us because we know which villain to expect to Make an entry. And honestly it gives of filling of a story having multiple leads which I also personally don't like. And thats all but as I said again this all is from my own preferences so you can ignore them if you'd want.

Bro ngl but I think you forgot saeko and other characters in this fic i mean saeko is beauty+booty+brains+browns. So it's a win win situation if you ever tried to add her in any forces. And it would also help in MC gaining control over the camp by mixing real people in the picture and with total control over infantry our MC here can sort of socially hypnotize everyone into following him.

Well I've read it in some Chinese fanfic so please 😉😑

Well it's hard to understand that someone from guys team can lose. And i have read it somewhere that ninjatsu is for the weak and taijutsu is for the strong. What it means is taijutsu can make you win in hyper focus wars by big margin.

That would be waste of such power.

Not gonna lie but hp stories are better when there's only single female lead or maximum 2 because that world is based on modern society and where many females hold power in their magical society so harem genre just doesn't suits it. But still many authors mix harem in it and make it unrecognisable. Well I'm mostly speaking for England society because there are many society's in our own real world who have harem in their culture and are very open about it. So i imagine same could be said about the culture in HP world.

But what they had was bones claw from start and the admantine claws were added after the experiment huge had to go through. So their basic genetic power is retractable bone claws not the metal ones.

When do you think aliens are going to come to us and let us film them with some HD camera and publicly announce about their existence to all of earth?

This story telling style is too jolly.

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Yes because many authors takes god as someone who can control their elements effortlessly. But in here they are seem to be the very personification of their divinity like if the god of light dies than there would be no light or like if appollo dies slowly all of greece would go dark. So to not mess up the plot too much this idle period given to Hades is justified. But with this kind of play some questions come to my mind, which are that when MC killed the light god the light started going dark so what about the scene where MC sealed cronos because shouldn't the time should become unstable because of that?

My bro here mentioned everything i wanted to say. I'll keep an eye on this fic for it the author do the editing stuff to touch all the problems written. And if not than it's tata bye bye for me. Because I don't like those inner monologue novels because it doesn't have that living feel to it.

Because nobody is above or below someone in art. So i hope you would think it from that perspective. Just tell the author where they come short or where they could have changed some settings to gain better results and etc. but rating them just doesn't sit right with me. And honestly 😆 when somebody rate something in front of me on their own than the first thing that comes to my mind is .....

Who's asking for these guys rating anyway? 😐 And bro where this yan gao nation, I want to invest in it or else getting passport will be hard 😂😆

thanks for the info. i basically have no knowledge of the 100 universe. and am just getting to know about it from your fanfic. and Relaying on fandom to fill the missing gap.