Preet_kapoor
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Para is described very well. The tension here rises and rises. At one point in time, it was looking very dangerous that tigers would attack the boys. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
The boys were intelligent to prank their friends on the one hand and gathered sympathy from Ms. John for missing the river rafting activity. Good Job! [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
it is still suspense how did good witch arrange the toast, bacon, and coffee. The main protagonist Veeir should have written more on finding with her how she managed human breakfast in the witch world.
It was quite an innovative idea to introduce the mysterious translator in the story which weaved the story forward very well.
you start with a very interesting and unusual idea of a boy who is turned into a frog. I like it and I also like the way your story develops