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The Adventurous Trip to the Forest

นักเขียน: VEER_KAPOOR
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อ่านนิยาย The Adventurous Trip to the Forest โดย ผู้เขียน VEER_KAPOOR ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.Are 3 besties lost in the forest or sneak out of the campsite for fun? Pls. read the story to fee the adventure....

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Are 3 besties lost in the forest or sneak out of the campsite for fun? Pls. read the story to fee the adventure.

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THE SECRET OF CASANOVA

ADULT NOVELS 21+!!! Many contain bed scenes, physical violence, verbal violence, and murder scenes, and dwell on the harsh mafia Life of the ’90s in the city of Venice, Italy. Be wise in reading! This Novel is a genre of magical-realistic fiction, written to take part in the WSA 2022 event. There will be many lessons contained in it, so don't miss every detail in this book! Warm Regards, HARAS. **** BLURB! (Italy, 1798) Not many people know. Before death picked him up, the legendary Biacomo Casanova secretly sailed into the middle of the sea to dispose of his most valuable heritage. A ring of magical power, with which, a man will be able to conquer the heart of any woman. "Wala! This is the end of my love journey. So to atone for sins, because with this ring I have slept with hundreds of women, then I will throw this ring and hope, no man will wear it in the future.” After saying the phrase The Legend of the woman's lover died, in a state of poverty and loneliness, with no one to accompany them. Then, 200 years later, a handsome young man named Casanova even found the magical ring. Then the wheel of fate changed completely! Casanova who had lived poor and despised became a rich man, very confident, charismatic, and very crazy about women. However, there are restrictions. Casanova can conquer a woman's heart. Romp and even fuck any girl with just a flick of a finger. But one thing not to do. Casanova can not fall in love! Because love will take away the magical power of the ring! As well as love, it is the Curse of God that will make Casanova a helpless beggar! So, can Casanova dampen his love desires? How many women will be seduced into bed? Is there a woman that Casanova can fall in love with? Check out Casanova's journey from being a nobody to an extraordinary man! He was born to' sincerely ' conquer every woman's heart, and also 'cleverly' serve the resistance of mafia kingpins throughout Italy. "Behold, I am sending you like sheep into the midst of wolves. Therefore, be wise as serpents, and sincere as doves." (Matthew 10: 16)

HARAS_ · สมัยใหม่
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16 Chs

East Meets West ( Cultivation World )

(The MC's name is Raj Who changes his name to Orochi later in the story.) Raj/Orochi is reincarnated into the world of cultivation. He is excited to be reborn in an anime world which he has always dreamt about. After being reincarnated he is excited to become strong and have a harem with beautiful women. MC is born in a strong clan too so he thinks it will be easy. And yes, everything was going easy and peaceful until the day his talent was tested. then....... Everything changed, His family, brother, sister, fiancee all abandoned him, his friends betrayed him and his cultivation was abolished by his enemies and was thrown into forest to die. All the anger, resentment, despair overloads his brain and something clicks in his mind and an RPG style window appears in front of his eyes. He remembered the most important thing in cultivation world that is 'strength and talent is what matters in this world.' Now what will he do? Will he become strong and gain his clan's appreciation? Will he have his revenge or will he be indifferent to all his past and start a new life? Will he become a hero or anti hero? Follow Raj's/Orochi's Adventure in the cultivation world. _________________________________ Note:- The MC won't be a good guy nor a bad guy he will do whatever he wants to. So please if you expect him to be Hero guy, then sorry this is not the novel you wanna read. I have started newly writing so hope you guys can bear some mistakes and enjoy the story. Please support my work.

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Daoisthzfo8c
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img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] The author used his wisdom to make ghosts run with the use of a flashlight. It was difficult to arrange a fire at midnight. Electricity is generally not available in the forest so a burning fire torch or flash light was the only possibility. [img=coins]

Bindu_0199
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I am amazed by the description of the bus journey from pick-up point to Dhikala. The weather and campsite view was described beautifully. The boys tiptoeing from the site show they were naughty and risk-taking characters. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

Pooja_Vacher
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[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] what a prank! The kids at the campsite were so sad to miss the thrill of staying overnight in the core area of the Forest and not seeing wolves and tigers.

Khatri_Apparels
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[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] I am smitten by the setup of a secluded house in the jungle near the waterbody. The author has justified the story by not hunting the rarest wild animals. The wolves cannot climb up the trees so they stayed on the first floor of the house. The tigers were there to drink the water. The creation of fear and suspense is totally justified. Big salute! to the author for justification and using good similes. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

VEER_KAPOOR
VEER_KAPOORนักเขียนVEER_KAPOOR

Wow! I am amazed with the vocabulary used in the story. The campsite and forest description is quite well written. The boys planned their safety quite well by choosing the first floor to stay overnight. I wish, ghost scene would have been a little longer but overall very satisfying to read. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

Preet_kapoor
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[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]The forest was described beautifully.I have been to Dhikala. It is famous for asiatic elephants and Bengal tigers.

Anand_K_2920
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[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] It is wonderful plot of three boys.I loved the prank part of the story. In my opinion the boys sneaked out of the campsite for fun.

VEER_KAPOOR
VEER_KAPOORนักเขียนVEER_KAPOOR

[img=coins] I love the character of Sandy who was humorous even at the time when boys were in the deep danger of a pack of wolves attach. The climax of the story is also very interesting when the tension is at its highest.

Daoisthzfo8c
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I liked the part when the boys are forced to spend a night in the creepy,haunted house.The sense of danger.The sense of danger carries on rising and rising through the piece,which is brilliant.[img=coins]

Kapoor_G
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This is such a fun and exciting story to read!The story is full of twists and turns, and keeps the reader on the edge of their seat.The readers cannot wait to find out what happens to Veeir,Jack and Sandy.

Kennisha_Kapur
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Huzzah Kapoor! Brilliantly written story. I love the use of rich vocabulary as well as similies and metaphors. Someone once said “Success is the fruit of good ideas pursued with energy, intelligence, and determination.” No wonder you’re doing so well! Congratulations Veer!

Mukesh_Kapoor_2939
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Good plot setting. The tension starts building up after readers learn the boys got lost in the jungle. They were a true warriors who made their plans against a pack of wolves and ambush of tigers. [img=coins][img=coins]

Daoisthzfo8c
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The good storyline kept the reader busy thinking about whether boys will save their lives from wild animals or they would get success in hunting them.

Pooja_Vacher
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[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] Good plot! good writing!good vocabulary and very effective use of similes and plot setting. It is a adventurous drama good for middle schoolers.

Veer_Kapoor
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[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] Good Job! It was a story of 3 best friends getting bored with the mundane school routines and desperately looking to spend some quality time. Their freedom made them lost in the jungle and the real story begins from here---[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

MC_Kapoor
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There is some lovely dialogue in this story-well done for choosing effective verbs for the dialogue instead of using 'said' all the time. you have used other words such as shouted and exclaimed. This makes your writing more interesting and exciting to read. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

VEER_KAPOOR
VEER_KAPOORนักเขียนVEER_KAPOOR

[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] Interesting story of 3best frIends lost in the jungle. The description of secluded house, jungle adventure, wild animals and ghost every scene is penned down very well. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

Anand_K_2920
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I read this novel several times and found it quite amazing. It is the perfect story for a short movie. I loved Veeir's character. He was not only brave but intelligent as well.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

VEER_KAPOOR
VEER_KAPOORนักเขียนVEER_KAPOOR

Beautiful plot and very well weaved! The author has made sure neither wild animals get hurt nor boys yet he maintained high drama and tension. [img=coins][img=coins]

VEER_KAPOOR
VEER_KAPOORนักเขียนVEER_KAPOOR

Great Plot! Beautifully written. salute to author for weaving the story in such a wonderful way, neither animals got hurt nor boys yet he kept the reader engaged in reading. The tension kept on rising from the time wolves were sensed in the area. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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