KingCristo

A mix of sorts my friend. More soon to be posted, I hope you enjoyed brother of combat!

oh my gosh my heart! Amen Amen brother. thank you so much for your words. I'll continue this work if it makes you happy!

I hope you're not just saying that comrade. Haha, hope you've enjoyed the book so far. :)

So the art work for the cover looks like Kurapika. That's pretty epic homie.

Thank you for your support comrade! Your complement means more to me than you can imagine!

It's an interesting premise I must say! The development is a strong build up to a soon powerful climax which I have yet to read. The design of the characters is superb. I love the details and description of each scene and scenario. I'd say the only thing you should do is break up your paragraphs and characters quotes. that's just about it. Besides that I've enjoyed giving this a short read!

lol of course! even if it is a personal preference you still execute the story with ease!

Overall the writing quality is decent and simplistic. Easy on the eyes and I'm not forcing myself to understand. I can tell the development is gonna be good for this one here but instead of telling what the story is gonna be about in the authors comment just let the flow happen and allow the story to take place instead of forcing what it's gonna be about. The readers are gonna want to figure it out for themselves. I'd say that's my one issue thus far so keep up the splendid writing my friend!

lol bruh.

lol nice 😂😂