Yes, I plan on editing the first few chapters a bit, so the readers can get more accustomed to the characters in the story.

I really like this book, the amount of detail and attention author put on the characters, really shows that he has this book planed out. I would love to see more chapters.

No, no. There is the girl, the mother and Liam. They are preparing for an event, I didn't specify her coming into the scene. I see.

It's supposed to be a hopeless rhetorical question, they have lived together their whole lives and this wasn't the first time it had happened. He is just asking himself in disappointment and disbelief. But the readers don't know that still, thank you for pointing it out.

Oh, you're right. I should have added a graphical to make it easier for readers to imagine it. It's like a daze, focus and creative light returned to his eyes.

It's an interesting concept, unlike anything I have seen on webnovel. It's original and interesting, the author has found a wonderful way to let us into the amazing world he/she has made.

I like how author is able to describe the scene, from just a few minutes of reading I am already fully immersed in the world he has created for us.

Thank you for your nice words, hope you like the novel.

Love the book, it's unlike other general books here and I just found it so interesting from the very start. Excited to see where author takes this book in the future.

Amazing book, I was really interested by the dialogs between the characters as it is very well done. I would love to see the book go further.

The first thing I noticed is how I couldn't stop reading it, even from the first chapter it hooks your right away. Amazing work by our author here. Hope this book get's the recognition it needs.

Glad you found it to your liking.

The story so far in beyond my expectations, it's interesting right from the start and wastes no time on unimportant details. For someone who likes to indulge in the plot right away, this is perfect. I'm already exited to see the Mc and his family get a better place in the world.

The author here, I have it planned out and it's just going to get more interesting as it goes. Continue to add it to your library and vote for it and more chapters will come.

thank you for the idea i will see what i can do.

Yes do you like it

Thank you for your feedback. I did it really quickly before but I shall change it right now, for a better one.

the author praising himself

if he doesn't accept her offer I'm gonna kill him.

that's just to settle her as the MCs FL