Valdevitch
I swear to the Son, Father, and Holy Spirit. If I see another Harem tag, I’m gonna go berserk…
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Valdevitch25dตอบกลับถึง EsenelThe author has refined taste!
"Inside this mystical world, time and space have lost their meaning. One cannot discern the direction, nor can they distinguish between the past, present, and the future. That is why an anchor is needed when visiting the Spirit World!"- Valdevitch25dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
MR FOOL!!!
Well, they were only used to fool people. - Valdevitch25dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
MR.MOON!!!
The golem poured 5 pounds of sanguine leeches into the wooden tub. These leeches were extremely minute creatures. They were attracted by the blood that had been leaking out of Adam's pores and immediately swam toward it. - Valdevitch25dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
PLEASE I WANT A MC THAT DOESNT JUST USE A SWORD!! BREAK THE CLICHE AUTHOR!!! PLEAAASEEE
Without hesitation, he chose the sword. Although he was not at all proficient with this weapon, it was still the weapon he was most familiar with. - Valdevitch25dตอบกลับถึง Ronan_McCrossan
W-What..
A man standing beside her respectfully complied. "Yes, professor. This girl's name is Lisa De Clare. Aptitude – A-grade, comprehension – B-grade. She comes from the Faber Province." - Valdevitch25dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
THEY HOMIES FR FR
"Edward, you made it!" Adam greeted him with a hearty laugh. - Valdevitch25dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Fatty from Soul Land? Is this a reference or just a coincidence?
He saw the fatty strutting away, his tummy jiggling up and down. Adam couldn't help but chuckle and think to himself, I guess not all noble kids are rude and arrogant… - Valdevitch25dตอบกลับถึง GaiasLittleTitan
Buddy, if he already has clothes, wouldnt it be a waste to buy more clothes? Even if he looks like a farmboy, until he has a way to make money, he should save it up as much as he can!
"Hey, everyone, look at this guy!" - Valdevitch25dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I love mc’s with long hair☺️ I just think its pretty.
His jet-black hair was parted from the middle. His hair had grown a lot since he left his hometown, and now it reached his shoulders. - Valdevitch25dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Fang Yuan would be proud!
Adam grabbed the pouch and looked inside. Upon seeing so many gold coins inside, he whistled in surprise. This was more money than he had managed to save back in his hometown in Cormier Kingdom. - Valdevitch25dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I have an idea! Stuff them into a sheep’s skin and lobotomize them!
However, after watching the black-armored Magus fighting off thousands of Magi single-handedly, Adam felt a little hot-blooded. For once, he decided to stand up for himself. - Valdevitch25dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Perhaps someone will burn his hair
His black hair was parted from the middle and reached the bottom of his neck. Adam's facial features were average, he was neither handsome nor bad-looking. No, to be honest, his appearance was actually below average. - Valdevitch25dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Nightingale my child🥺🥺
The famous Moon City was the capital of the Nightingale Kingdom. And the destination of the traveling party was the renowned magic academy in Moon City, the Clover Academy. - Valdevitch25dตอบกลับถึง Valdevitch
Why do i keep coming back to novels and commenting the same thing….
"Hahaha! Who would have thought? The mighty Magus Stockholm would be reduced to such a miserable state!" - Valdevitch25dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Interesting last name
"Hahaha! Who would have thought? The mighty Magus Stockholm would be reduced to such a miserable state!" - Valdevitch25dตอบกลับถึง Valdevitch
Wait i already said that..
I'm telling the truth! Of course, only part of it! - Valdevitch25dตอบกลับถึง Valdevitch
My god i had a stroke typing this
I'm telling the truth! Of course, only part of it! - Valdevitch25dตอบกลับถึง DarkenedWorlds
Miss Not So Sidekick, its funny asf, my pfp is also from there as well.
Alan just nodded and a dazzling smile appeared on Kevin's face, he asked him again excitedly : "Can I eat it now ?" - Valdevitch4mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Author, instead of explaining what he’s thinking, I think it would be nicer if we can just hear his thoughts. Also, I feel like you explain too much how these characters think. Instead of just outright showing the thoughts of other characters, you could show them through actions. Like a silent stare, biting their lip, holding back tears, determined eyes. I feel like it would make these characters feel a little less one dimensional if you don’t always explain exactly why they are acting in certian ways. Or if you are to do that, then do it when you switch POV’s.
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