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HeartlessDaemon

HeartlessDaemon

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2021-06-02 เข้าร่วมแล้วGlobal
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  • HeartlessDaemon
    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Dmanga_lover

    Yep, beginning is inspired. Few people mentioned it. The only good part was the beginning, so i wanted to create a story with the beginning of that anime. Rest are completely different because that anime is wasted potential.

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง LordYang

    Yep, it's also very satisfying to create power systems to both write and read :)

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง LordYang

    I'm not Japanese, that's the point. Nyaru is a comedic character to make fun of the loli tropes. It's supposed to be irritating, that's why Daemon asks her to stop calling him "onii-chan", she calls him "brother" in later chapters instead. But of course, she will have more character depth in the later chapters, when I write her story as I planned. Right now she has one current aim that's in the story's background for now: Finding her mother

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง LordYang

    Will fix it later today

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง LordYang

    Let's just say, something realistic will happen in 3-4 chapters later which will not entirely change Daemon's personality but will give him a lesson to take this world seriously, where everyone can die easily.

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง LordYang

    First chapters are comedic and reletable. I made this on purpose to give character's world experience some intimacy. Real story kicks in after a few chapters.

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง HeartlessDaemon

    🤨

    "Jo, please take this," Hope whispered, giving the squirrel the bag with seeds. "These are not for you. Just go after my mother and drop a little bit along the way. When you finish it, come back for another. If you manage to do this five times, I'll reward you with a huge bag of nuts."
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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    This can both go either way...

    "Jo, please take this," Hope whispered, giving the squirrel the bag with seeds. "These are not for you. Just go after my mother and drop a little bit along the way. When you finish it, come back for another. If you manage to do this five times, I'll reward you with a huge bag of nuts."
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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง TofSpades

    Let's just say "comical" for now since our character will go into some realistic emotional development. But that doesn't stop the comical jokes, gags and references of course :)

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
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    The story is mysterious and engaging with an Ok pace. Pace needs to be more slower i think, in order to characters to develop. World background is good Character designs are great I've added your book to my library so we will see about stability of updates, for now i wil leave it at 3

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง EldritchBlade

    Trust me, i've played enough Mobile MMO's to write this chapter ;)

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Hassy_101

    Non-player character. In video games, they only purpose is to give you random quests to gain EXP/Gold/Items.

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Hassy_101

    with each other

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง PerkyPompous_Pixie

    Unfortunately, no. I'll focus on the MMO part for now, not the romance and harem part.

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง PerkyPompous_Pixie

    I sometimes mess up the pronouns because of my main language. Sorry. Women: Lockheart, Nyaru, Sakura, Rem, Ren Men: Daemon, Haruto

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง PerkyPompous_Pixie

    Here's an interesting fact: Daemon is my 2 years younger version. Yeah, he is a self-insert. X) But I'll both roast Lockheart and Daemon though, so don't worry. Daemon's dumb acts will sound fairly annoying and won't be justified. Instead, he will learn to overcome his toxic mindset while learning how to talk to people. Remember, he hasn't talked to anyone for months.

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Hassy_101

    Maybe i can mention, Daemon exiting from "auto-farm" mode and wolfs stop spawning.

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง PerkyPompous_Pixie

    Yeah, it was 4 a.m when i wrote this, so i was half-awake. You're right I will edit this chapter today and release the 16th chapter.

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Yassybella

    Nah, serious battles will start from chapter 5

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    HeartlessDaemon2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง HeartlessDaemon

    Also, this is not just reference but also explains why Daemon and Lockheart always sleeping in Main Floor.

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