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Yep, beginning is inspired. Few people mentioned it. The only good part was the beginning, so i wanted to create a story with the beginning of that anime. Rest are completely different because that anime is wasted potential.
Yep, it's also very satisfying to create power systems to both write and read :)
I'm not Japanese, that's the point. Nyaru is a comedic character to make fun of the loli tropes. It's supposed to be irritating, that's why Daemon asks her to stop calling him "onii-chan", she calls him "brother" in later chapters instead. But of course, she will have more character depth in the later chapters, when I write her story as I planned. Right now she has one current aim that's in the story's background for now: Finding her mother
Will fix it later today
Let's just say, something realistic will happen in 3-4 chapters later which will not entirely change Daemon's personality but will give him a lesson to take this world seriously, where everyone can die easily.
First chapters are comedic and reletable. I made this on purpose to give character's world experience some intimacy. Real story kicks in after a few chapters.
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This can both go either way...
Let's just say "comical" for now since our character will go into some realistic emotional development. But that doesn't stop the comical jokes, gags and references of course :)
The story is mysterious and engaging with an Ok pace. Pace needs to be more slower i think, in order to characters to develop. World background is good Character designs are great I've added your book to my library so we will see about stability of updates, for now i wil leave it at 3