IvanArcadia

meh..don't mind the small stuff

Isn't it "Brother of a Late Villian" now?

In my opinion, Yandere's are the best

Also Great with the story though. Your vocabulary and story telling is simply top notch. I enjoyed reading the story. The BEST Hollywood fic that I have read. 👍

The real question is, are you gonna use her to make a character development for protag? Like getting together and dumbing afterwards?🤔 Honestly, In my opinion that would ruin the story though. I mean we all read novels, fanfics, etc to relive our fantasies and day dreams. So..like getting into a relationship and it being broken upart kinda puts a damper on the mood. Also whatever I mentioned here basically just my opinion. You can move forward with whatever plans you have for the fic. I am strictly just stating my thoughts. 😊

In my opinion, it's better to change the name while giving it a small upgrade or something. Like not a full level-up, but like a fusion of a small skill and this one to make a new one. In that way it won't be too overpowered and you can change the name of the skill to. I mean a reasonable explanation for the name change.

I guess it is fated to happen

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You made it wired by stating that 😑