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2 Follow the plotline closely, if you decide to do this then you will start incorporating irregularities in the story which will lead to plot holes ultimately ending the story midway .

2 Follow the plotline closely, if you decide to do this then you will start incorporating irregularities in the story which will lead to plot holes ultimately ending the story midway .

At one time an adequate fanfic but now due to adding too many unknown elements it has lost its potency .

There is nothing great about this story. In these types of stories either you have a different concept or get a momentum going. But it's slow all the way till chapter 100.

It's a fresh story focusing on a first cultivator but due to not having anything exciting happening in the story it makes the reading experience very dull.

The story has nothing to capture the interest of the reader. it is dull and uninstresting.

one of the best fics out there for HP. sad to see it being dropped.

The story is very erratic. Not at all suitable for a novel narration, the dialogue looks like it's suited for a crack fic or a manga or anime. Not a diss on the story.

There is nothing in this fic, just the SI MC peppered inconsistently throughout the story .

The story is good but after some time we are seeing many discrepancies in MC nature and personality which are different from the narrative set by the writer. Because of that the immersion is broken and the story does not remain engaging enough.

The translation and grammar is the biggest thing that is holding this story back. also the pandering of the mc can be lowered to make it more authentic .

a decent fic but too much info dump makes it hard to stay connected with the story.

The bipolar mentality of the mc makes the character uninteresting. It halts the story progression in its beginning phase.

The story is quite a feel good type but it feels more like a summary with some dialogue sprinkled in rather than a story narration.

Bad translation with lack of grammar makes this fic difficult to get through.

Bad translation and average narrative makes this fic dull and repetitive.

The story cannot be any more generic than this.

Inconsistent update schedule and story hang ups has made this fic a downer.

Excessive name calling and childlike style of narration makes this fix cringe very quickly.